Unsigned Idea 2 for Logo

This is my second idea for the logo for the AS Live production. I think that it adds more of a gritty feel to the other idea I had.

Unsigned Idea for logo

Here is an idea for a logo design for the show this is one of a few that i am currently working on

Update

This is my first post in along time, I have been very ill the last week unable to move from bed ect. I am now back on track and re-engaged with the course