Tuesday 22 February 2011

The Meeting Pitch







When the police raid a house, a woman who has never had human contact or seen the light of day is revealed for the first time.


Im finding it hard to convey the meaning of my idea through the pitch i hope the synopsis makes it clearer 

1 comment:

  1. all the ingredients are here for a cool pitch. just needs a rearranging of words to make it flow. You don't have to TELL the story in a pitch, you are SELLING the idea...

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